Designer: Jamie Abraham
Not sure why Jamie is having trouble keeping the right proportions on his clipart, but in his re-design there's no doubt what business "TLC" is in. [The ad he worked from showed a photo of the business from the street and there was no clue as to what TLC was!]
Designer: Melissa Brown
Melissa submitted two variations of her design and I suggested she go with this one which is more 'compact'. The only question I have now is, Does some portion of the "catch phrase" read more easily/does some portion get lost? If so, how could that be remedied most easily?
Melissa submitted two variations of her design and I suggested she go with this one which is more 'compact'. The only question I have now is, Does some portion of the "catch phrase" read more easily/does some portion get lost? If so, how could that be remedied most easily?
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